Fiction Short Story ( crazy five )

Crazy Five

Youngky is a young boy who is school in a senior high school, he is a smart, friendly an joyful boy. He is join in one organization in his school that make him find his best friend. The first is Toro who is indifferently and funny. The second is Syaid, he is uncommunicatively and joyfully. And the third is Hani, she is beautiful girl and have a good voice . and the last is Agel, she is cute girl and tomboy. Their friendship is start in an organization that they follow , it make them to be close friend.

All day of them is always be happy and funny. There are so many togetherness happened in every day, it is make them to be closer as one as. One day they are going to holiday together to climbing a hill When they are climbing Syaid said that

“ I thing we should find a good name for our friendship and make a promise when we have arrive on the top of this hill”

All of them is agree whit it, on a long way to climbing there are many joke and purity they do together. When they are arrive on the top of the hill Yougky said that

“ we are always joyful and laugh when we are together and almost of our time we face together at school or at home  and when we are together there are joke and lunacy that we do, thanks guy’s you have make me always be happy” .

And Toro also said : “it is right when we are together we always we always laugh we are looking have not problem in our life, we are looking free it make us like a crazy one .”

Hani also give a respond “ I hope our friendship is for a long time and forever although sometime we will graduate from our school and be separated but we should always be friendship.”

Then Agelia said “ I agree although there will so many test an problem we should always remember our promise in here and there is no problem that may be hidden as one as, we should share our problem and helping as on as.”

And the last is Syaid said “ and we also may not have a love more then love as friend or family as one as because if one of us loving one of us and make a relationship it will make our friendship be broken.”

They all agree with it all and Yougky asked  “ so what is the good name for our friendship ?“

Syaid said “ because we are always be laugh when we are together like a crazy one and we always in five people I thing Crazy Five is good name, Crazy mean is make our friendship always be happy and enjoy for us “

And all of them is agree whit it and the name of their friendship is Crazy Five and the hill is be a witness of their promise and friendship. After the day they are be closer friend as one as and always be happy.

And then one day they are organize a student orientation of their school for the new students. And Youngky  should be indifferently person when he meet the new students. In student orientation Youngky meet with shanty, she is a beautiful girl, respectful and smart . it make Yougky falling in love with her, when he meet shanty he fell palpitated in his heart is quickly.

A few day after students orientation, their teacher calling Yougky and Syaid  to order them to make the name list of new students that follow the organization in the school because in their school students must follow minimum in one organization . and then Yougky and Syaid coming to shanty class. It is make Yougky be nervous and happy because he can see Shanty.      

Apparently shanty is join in the same organization with Yougky and his friends, it is make shanty and Yougky always meet and be closer. One month is over and Yougky is sure that what he feeling is love so he tells about his feeling whit his best friends and all of his best friend is very happy what is Yougky tell and they support Yougky to say his feeling to shanty soon.

With the supporting from his friends Yougky is more confident to say his feeling to shanty so  Yougky meet shanty and he asks shanty to follow them to going to the lake with his friends on Sunday. And Shanty is agree with his invitation.

In the next day they are going to lake together and in the lake Yougky express and say his feeling to Shanty  and Shanty said that she is also has same feeling with Yougky and all of his best friends is screaming happy.

            Two month is over Yougky is oftentimes spend his time with Shanty and he is be seldom spend his time with his best friends, it make his best friends to be loss him so they meet the Yougky and said what they feel and after that Yougky is more often bring Shanty meet his best friends. But it is be problem for Syaid because it make Syaid also falling in love with Shanty unconsciously and unknowing Yougky and Shanty.

The next day Yougky is called by grand teacher, Yougky is selected as a participant in national competition and he must stay in three week there to join the competition. He is happy but he also sad because he should be separated with his best friends and Shanty, but all of his best friend , Shanty and his family is supporting him.

The next day letters Yougky go to join in competition and he ask all his best friends to take care with Shanty , specifically with Syaid because Syaid’s house is near with Shanty’s house. During Yougky going , Syaid and Shanty is always go and back together because their home is near and shanty only regard Syaid as best friend of her boyfriend but it is make syaid loving more with shanty and then Syaid tell his feeling to shanty, it make shanty very shocked and disappointed with him.

In a week Shanty is always shun Syaid , it makes Syaid be sad so he meet shanty to clear this problem but when Syaid meet her , Toro and Hani is hear what Syaid said. It make Toro and Hani be angry to Syaid, after school Syaid explain what is happen to Toro, Hani and Agel. They are very disappointed with Syaid but he is also angry with them because they can’t understand what Syaid feel , he was try to restrain his feeling to shanty but he can’t , and then Syaid goes and leaves them and Agel is so sad and speechless.

In two week Syaid is always shun with Toro, Hani, Agel and Shanty but Agel is always try to make the situation is better but she always be fail because Toro and Hani is still angry with Syaid. The next day Yougky is coming back from his competition and their friends is very happy so they are going to eat together but Syaid is not coming and Yougky is asked about it and Toro said that Syaid is called by teacher to make an agenda and Yougky . because Syaid is not coming so Yougky is meet Syaid after school but he can’t find Syaid.

The next day Yougky meets with Syaid but he only say hallo.. to Yougky  and looking not happy when he meets with Yougky and Syaid is going to library and leave Yougky alone. He is confused with  Syaid , he asked by himself what is happen ?, what is wrong ?.And then he meet Toro, Hani and Agel to asked about it but Toro said that Syaid has problem with his family and he can’t tell to us and Agel is keep calm .

Yougky and Shanty is go home together and he tell what is happen with Syaid  and shanty is only calm  and say don’t know because she can’t tell to Yougky what is right happen. In a week Yougky can’t meet Syaid because Syaid is always shun them, and then Agel meets Yougky because she is very lose and miss all the moment their  friendship and she tell all is happened with Syaid when he gone. Yougky is very shock with Agel told so he look for Syaid and he asked it all to Syaid and Syaid say that it is right and he explain it to Yougky . and then he asked it to shanty and she also tells all is happened. Yougky is very shock and  disappointed.

In a few week Yougky is shun all of them and then Yougky is said to shanty that they must end their relationship until his relation with his friend is coming well and shanty is agree with it. The next day Yougky and all his best friends meet and clear the problem, and then they are coming back together and happy as before.

In a few month they are graduated from their school but Yougky is still loving shanty so he continue his relationship. and then all of them continue their study in different university buy they are still communication each other and some time they are still going to holiday together as before, and Syaid found his girlfriend in his university. 

The elements of the story

1)    Plot

a)    Exposition

( When Yougky meets with Toro,Agel, Hani and Syaid  in an Organization that they follow and it make them to be closer and then they are going to climbing the hill together )

Youngky is a young boy who is school inn a senior high  school, he is a smart, friendly an joyful boy. He is join in one organization in his school that make him find his best friend. The first is Toro who is indifferently and funny. The second is Syaid, he is uncommunicatively and joyfully. And the third is Hani, she is beautiful girl and have a good voice . and the last is Agel, she is cute girl and tomboy. Their friendship is start in an organization that they follow , it make them to be close friend. All day of them is always be happy and funny. There are so many togetherness happened in every day, it is make them to be closer as one as. One day they are going to holiday together to climbing a hill

b)    Rising action

( Yougky should go to join a competition for a few week but it makes Syaid is falling in love to Shanty  because Syaid always together with Shanty when yougky is gone )

Yougky is called by grand teacher, Yougky is selected as a participant in national competition and he must stay in three week there to join the competition. He is happy but he also sad because he should be separated with his best friends and Shanty, but all of his best friend , Shanty and his family is supporting him.

The next day letters Yougky go to join in competition and he ask all his best friends to take care with Shanty , specifically with Syaid because Syaid’s house is near with Shanty’s house. During Yougky going , Syaid and Shanty is always go and back together because their home is near and shanty only regard Syaid as best friend of her boyfriend but it is make syaid loving more with shanty and then Syaid tell his feeling to shanty, it make shanty very shocked and disappointed with him.

c)    Climax

( Yougky and all his friends knowing that Syaid is also falling in love to Shanty it make all of them is angry and disappointed to Syaid and syaid is shun all of them )

Yougky and Shanty is go home together and he tell what is happen with Syaid  and shanty is only calm  and say don’t know because she can’t tell to Yougky what is right happen. In a week Yougky can’t meet Syaid because Syaid is always shun them, and then Agel meets Yougky because she is very lose and miss all the moment their  friendship and she tell all is happened with Syaid when he gone. Yougky is very shock with Agel told so he look for Syaid and he asked it all to Syaid and Syaid say that it is right and he explain it ti Yougky . and then he asked it to shanty and she also tells all is happened. Yougky is very shock and  disappointed.

d)    Falling action

( Yougky is ended his relationship with Shanty and met his friends to clear the problem )

In a few week Yougky is shun all of them and then Yougky is said to shanty that they must end their relationship until his relation with his friend is coming well and shanty is agree with it. The next day Yougky and all his best friends meet and clear the problem, and then they are coming back together and happy as before.

e)    Resolution

(The relation of Yougky is coming well and they are be close friend again as before  and they continue their study in university and shanty and Yougky is continue their relationship) 

In a few month they are graduated from their school but Yougky is still loving shanty so he continue his relationship. and then all of them continue their study in different university buy they are still communication each other and some time they are still going to holiday together as before, and Syaid found his girlfriend in his university. 

2)    Characters and characterizations

Characters

a.    Major Characters

1.    Yougky                  : Joyful and Smart

2.    Shanty                   : Beautiful, Respected and Smart

3.    Syaid                      : Joyful, and uncommunicative 

b.    Minor Characters

1.    Toro                      : indifferently and funny

2.    Hani                     : is beautiful girl and have a good voice

3.    Agel                      : cute girl and tomboy

Characterization method    : By telling and showing method

3)    Setting            :

a)    Setting of Place      : at school , hill and lake

b)    Setting of time        : in the noon

c)    Atmosphere                        : happiness, disillusionment, fury, betrayal and regret

4)    Theme                        : The theme of this story is about struggle of friendship .

5)    Symbol           : Five people and the school

6)    Allegory          : Moral  (solidarity and loyalty )

7)    Style               :  Standard diction

8)    Tone               : Dramatic

9)    Point of view  :

the narration of this story is 3^td Person because the story is told by the author and the author using the name or he ,she and they to tell in this story.

Type of narration is omniscient because the “all knowing “ narrator knows all of the details about events, character, ect. And reveals them to reader as the story unfolds.

10) Moral Value   :

v  The true friends will make your life be happier and joyful .because friend is someone that can we share about problem and happiness.

v  There is none is perfect, everyone is ever do the mistake and some time is unconscious by us

v  Love is never wrong, because love is a gift from our god, the wrong is someone or time that is not exact

v  We can meet with many people and friend but just a few that we can say as best friend

My name is M.Ikhsan, I was bond on October 03^td 1994 at Lubuklinggau, my parents are Mr.Amat Ali And Mrs. Usma Darma wati, I have two brothers and two sisters and I am the youngest. Now I live at Yos Sudarso Street No.13 Rt.03 Kel. Majapahit, I was graduated from :

Ø  SD Negeri 45 Lubuklinggau On 2006

Ø  SMP Negeri 02 Lubukliggau On 2009

Ø  SMA Negeri 04 Lubuklinggau On 2012

Ø  And now I am studying at STKIP PGRI Lubuklinggau in English education program .

The some achievement that I have got are :

Ø  As the second winner in the first aid competition at SMA Tugumulyo On 2009

Ø  As the first winner in set and take apart of emergency stretcher competition  ( Youth Red Cross competition in SUMBAGSEL ) on 2009

Ø  As a participant in Latihan Kepemimpinan Siswa Kota Lubuklinggau on 2009

Ø  The third runer up  in JUMBARA NASIONAL ( Youth Red Cross Competition ) On 2010

Ø  As participant in Bandar Lampung Scrabble Competition ( Scrabble National  Competition ) on 2014

My quotation

“Don’t wish you will be the best but Do the best for everyone , every time , everything, and everywhere so you will get the best from God ”

                                                                                    By : M.ikhsan

“ if you can imagine it you can create it. If you can dream it you can become it “

                                                                                    By : Ward, William Arthur

“ may the pain you have known and the conflict you have experienced give you the strength to walk through life facing each new situation with courage and optimism”

                                                            By : the book “big dream big success 

Synopsis

In a senior high school there are some students that follow an organization that make of the to be best friend, they are Yougky, Syaid, Toro, Hani dan Agel. In their day they are always happy and enjoy and they are always spend their time together. Sometime they go to climb the hill and they give the name of their friendship is Crazy five. One day Yougky meets with shanty and he falling in love with  her. And Youngky and Shanty is in relationship but the next time Yougky should go for a few time and it make Syaid also falling in love with Shanty, but sometime Yougky and all of them knowing it make them be disappointed with Syaid, it make syaid always shun them and their friendship is to be broken , but next shanty and Yougky is end their relationship to make Crazy Five is coming well as before, and the last their friendship is coming well as before and all of them was graduate from his school and continue their study in different university and sometime they are hangout and spend their time together .